The aim of this report is to present what is popular in Labschool Kebayoran. I interviewed five of my classmates by blackberry messenger and in person. The questions concerned food and music.
Food:
About two-thirds of students in labschool kebayoran prefer Indonesian food to food from other countries. But half of them said that their favorite food is Italian food (Pizza, Spaghetti, Pasta). And about half of them said that their favorite drink is mineral water.
Music:
All of my friends like listening to music. And all of them prefer American songs to Indonesian songs. Usually they are listening to music when they bored and going to sleep.
The most surprising aspect of the report is that a large number like Indonesian food but they said their favorite food is food from other country (Pizza, Spaghetti, Pasta, Sushi).
Syahla Putri Windayana XB (38)
Syahla Putri Windayana XB (38)
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Hi, Syahla!
Actually your report is good, but there are things that I want to comment.
First, I don't think you write the report in proper order. Cause you didn't mention any conclusion.
I think you should add some reasons for each answer. For example, why did they prefer American songs? So, we can understand why everything up there is popular in Labschool Kebayoran.
Your grammar is good, but maybe you should re-check each sentences. To convince that the sentences are connected and make sense.
I know I'm not an expert of grammar, but it's good to learn :)
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